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Philly's Shoe, Missing You
- A soldier at war, a wife at home
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Submitted: Sat Mar 29 10:03:05 EST 2003 from
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Full Name: MARGARET BRYER Who do you want the poem written for?: MY HUSBAND OUR 1YEAR WEDDING ANNIVERSARY Why do you want the poem written ?: MY HUSBAND IS IN THE US ARMY, AND HE IS OVER SEAS AT WAR, ME AND MY SON ( 4 MONTH OLD ), ARE HERE MISSING HIM, AND I WAS WONDERING IF YOU CAN WRITE A NICE POEM FOR ME TO SEND HIM ABOUT LOVE, HOW HAPPY HE MADE ME AND SOMETHING ABOUT HIM BEING AWAY AT WAR, HOW HARD IT IS, AND HOW MUCH HE IS BEING LOVED AND MISSED, ALSO IF YOU CAN INCLUDE OUR SON IN IT TOO, THANK YOU Key Messages: LOVE, MISSING HIM, HEART ACHE, LONELY, SCARED, AFRAID OF HIM BEING AT WAR, HOW HE MADE ME THE HAPPIEST WOMAN SINCE HE MARRIED ME, HOW LUCKY ME AND MY SON ARE TO HAVE HIM AS A HUSBAND AND A DADDY, HOW PRECIOUS EVERY PHONE CALL IS FROM HIM, HOW I CAN'T SLEEP T NIGHT WITH OUT HIM HERE, HOW MY SON MISSES HIS VOICE, HOW MY SON SMILES EVERY TIME HE HEARS DADDY'S VOICE, OR HEARS ME SAY DADA TO HIM, HOW EVERYWHERE I GO REMINDS ME OF HIM...AND HOW MUCH WE LOVE HIM, AND MISS HIM... Memorable Moments: HOW WE WENT CAMPING, AND WHEN WE WOKE UP NEXT MORNING THE AIR MATTRESS HAD NO AIR, AND WE SLEPT ON A HARD FLOOR, HOW FREE AND HAPPY WE WERE TOGETHER, THAT NOW I WOULD GIVE ANYTHING TO DO THIS AGAIN BUT THIS TIME WITH OUR SON, HOW WE PLANNED TO GO AWAY FOR A LONG VACATION WHEN HE COMES BACK, HE BETTER KEEP THAT PROMISE, HOW WE MET ON THE COMPUTER, AND THAT SAME NIGHT WE SPOKE ON THE PHONE FOR 9 HOURS TILL MORNING, FROM THAN I KNEW WE WERE MEANT TO BE, THAT HE WAS THE ONE...HOW WE WENT TO A BROADWAY SHOW, AND WHEN WE CAME OUT OUR CAR WAS TOWED...HOW WE ALWAYS JUST DROVE FREELY AROUND THE COUNTRY SIDE, WITH NO WORRIES... THAT THE BABY MISSES HIS CAT NOISES, AND I MISS HIS BITES, AND THE MESS HE ALWAYS MAKES, AND HOW I MISS HIS LITTLE COMPLEMENTS, OF HOW BEAUTIFUL I AM Other Comments: YES, PLEASE LET HIM KNOW ALSO HOW LONELY AND SAD NIGHTS ARE NOW, FOR HIM TO TAKE CARE OF HIM SELF OUT THERE, AND COME HOME AND BRING THE BABY'S SHOE THAT LITTLE PHILLY GAVE HIM FOR GOOD LUCK, AND THAT OUR SON IS THE MAN OF THE HOUSE NOW, AND HE IS TAKING CARE OF MOMMY, BUT ITS A HARD JOB, SO HE BETTER COME BACK SOON, AND HE NEEDS TO SEE HIS SON GROW UP, Style: sad and romantic, also little happiness in it Package Type: Economy Last thoughts: please make this poem with feelings, and romantic, very from the bottom of my heart, and include words SOLDIER in it, my husband , my soldier, my hero, how very proud we are of him... thank you
Philly's Shoe, Missing You
I guess sometimes life just isn't
fair,
otherwise it would last forever,
you'd also be by my side
and we'd spend our first
anniversary together.
Sometimes life doesn't always work
out,
exactly as you'd planned,
sometimes it's hard to figure out
why,
sometimes it's hard to understand.
Now I think of you over there
and mere distance may keep us
apart,
just know that I love you very much
and you are always in my heart.
Your son misses you too,
I guess that should come as no
surprise,
but whenever I need to see your
face,
I just look into his bright,
smiling eyes.
Do you know you have made me so
happy?
I couldn't have picked better -
even if I'd tried
and I hate the thought of you being
at war,
there are nights where I've just
cried and cried.
But I know a soldiers' duty is a
big one
and if you had the choice, you'd be
here with me,
together we'd camp and drive
through the country,
together, we'd find our better
place to be.
My heart aches so, I get lonely and
scared,
I can't sleep at night without you
in the bed,
every phone call from you is so
precious,
because you are walking where many
fear to tread.
Our son misses your voice too,
every time he hears you, you should
see his smile,
he loves it when I say Dada to him,
(and I may say that more than just
once in a while).
I remember when we went camping
and we awoke to a mattress with no
air,
we'd slept the night on a hard
floor,
another magical moment I'm glad we
shared.
How free and happy we were
together,
I would do anything to have that
time again,
of course, this time we'll take our
son with us
and I'll keep dreaming of that
time, sometime when.
We plan to go away when you get
back
and that's a promise you're bound
to keep,
I'll even get the mattress
repaired,
at least that way, we'll get a good
nights sleep.
But seriously, the night we met on
the Internet
and then spent the next nine hours
on the phone,
I knew then that you were the one
for me,
I knew then that I'd never be
alone.
So, hurry home safely my darling,
I'm missing the mess you always
make,
I'm missing your little compliments
and you know that flattery is all
it ever takes.
So, hurry home safely my darling
and please don't forget little
Philly's shoe,
just know that I love you very much
and if you haven't guessed it by
now - I'm missing you!
And Happy First Anniversary
darling,
that's really what these words are
for,
just know that I love you very much
and that I'll love you for
evermore.
Copyright Allen Jesson :) 2003
"Wow! It is perfect I love it, yes you
can use my story and our names, and please send me a copy of the story u
write, thank you so much I can also send you a pic of us or the little one in
an army outfit. here they are.. I am sending u few pics...THANK YOU AGAIN
TO MY DADDY<>SSG.
LANCE BRYER<>, born 10/30/2002 AND
ALSO HERE IS A LINK TO A PAGE I MADE...  |
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